tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5527248326652000073.post310200581353392962..comments2023-05-27T06:02:59.370-07:00Comments on Color Coordinated: Lessons from Elements of Style - Part 4Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17527989806224086214noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5527248326652000073.post-38845708945561550252013-10-25T13:33:28.694-07:002013-10-25T13:33:28.694-07:00Thanks for the timely reminder on editing. The boo...Thanks for the timely reminder on editing. The book my NaNo WIP is based on does a lot of repetition, because the MC is in denial about someone trying to kill her. In that case, it actually works, but I get frustrated along with the detective trying to get through her stubborn, newly divorced, trying to be independent, argumentative skull.Belinda Y. Hugheshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03343519897093994472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5527248326652000073.post-7366575013725493332013-10-23T23:21:34.114-07:002013-10-23T23:21:34.114-07:00It's not about what you write - it's about...It's not about what you write - it's about what you cut! I wish I could remember who said that.<br /><br />The Mists of Avalon by Marion Zimmer Bradley - I remember most of the men had their hair cut short 'in the Roman fashion'. It was interesting to know that once, but every time became annoying.<br /><br />I love cutting the excess words from my writing. It's so therapeutic.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03373795452273771571noreply@blogger.com