tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5527248326652000073.post4921858725508716512..comments2023-05-27T06:02:59.370-07:00Comments on Color Coordinated: Pulling Your Reader Out of the StoryAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17527989806224086214noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5527248326652000073.post-68463422222290330422013-12-04T12:17:44.942-08:002013-12-04T12:17:44.942-08:00These things will come back to me even YEARS later...These things will come back to me even YEARS later, regardless of how much I try to let them go. For example, I was drying my hair a few days ago and thought, "You know how the Architect in the Matrix said that Neo was a revolving character that keeps being reincarnated to come back and try to take down the machines all the time? Why didn't the machines just kill all of the people that wake up early in the little pods instead of flushing them down the toilet WHILE STILL ALIVE to be picked up by the ships at the end of the tunnels? This would take what, one or two lines of programming code? If the whole goal is to get the human race under complete control, why not kill the rebels that wake up from the matrix when they are naked, scared and captured in a little bubble incubator??? Problem solved." The Matrix. This was forever ago. <br /><br />Also - a huge timeline issue in a comic that I was reading called Avenger's Arena, where the first book had a fight scene with a specific timetable, then said "28 days previously..." but never re-enacted the fight at the proper time. These things bother me. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04776206272834225865noreply@blogger.com